Nov 8, 2009

Love Endures...

He was a cool guy with a soft attitude. She was a dynamic young lady with full of spirits. She desperately wanted to talk to him before he would leave the city. He had come to the city to express his love towards her, but he could not do it till the last day, as they had been from two different teams who spent the difficult time being opponents, as almost enemies. Now she called him there to express a very important feeling of her life.

He: Did you want to talk to me?
She: Yeah…

He: (Took a moment…) Yeah, tell me.
She: (Still silent and was staring at her legs)

He: Excuse me, can we talk now?
She: Yes, sure.

He: (Eagerly waiting to hear from her)
She: Could you please excuse me if you don’t like my opinion?

He: (Took a deep breath) Yeah, ok.
She: (Preparing her heart to speak out…)

He: (With a cool voice) See, I need to rush now, could you please…
She: (Before he ended his lines) Will you marry me?

A minute of silence…

He: Do you really mean it?
She: Yes, I mean it.

He: (Happy at his heart) What do you know about me?
She: I love you.

He: But what do you know about me?
She: (Silent…)

He: Did we talk to each other earlier?
She: No

He: Did I ever behave nicely with you?
She: No

He: Then how could you ask that?
She: I love you for what you are.

He: Means?
She: I would have never loved you, had you changed yourself nicely for me.

He: (Impressed…)
She: I would have never expressed my feelings, if I was not sure that you love me.

He: (?) So, you are sure that I love you?
She: I know you.

A minute of silence…

He: (Still silent)
She: Please forgive me if I did hurt your feelings.

He moved close to her so that he could catch her breath, could hear her heartbeat, and could feel her melting in his arms. They were all alone there having their heartbeats locked with each other’s.
He: Do I deserve you?
She: Never ask me that.

He: Answer me…
She: We both have got more than what we deserve.

74 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Very impressed with this, good to read.

Yvonne.

Mads... said...

so sweet..luvly post of luv..:)

Prasad Gutti said...
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Prasad Gutti said...

Hi Prams,

This is the comment for your previous post. I think I am the one among who has given comments to your earlier posts. Thank you so much for replying to my earlier posts. Still there are lot of posts where I need to comment. will do soon the same.

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Prasad

Prasad Gutti said...
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Prasad Gutti said...

Hi Prams...

No words to say, because it is a LOVE. I loved it...
And a lovey post, deserving towards each other.

Hey... Pic is very nice.

Hot pic with sweet romantic moments on a rainy day.

hmmm I need to wait for the moment WHO deserves ME... heheheh

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Prasad

Anya said...

Hi Prams
Its a very romantic post today
I love it !!!!
I am a romantic person ..... ;)
greetings
Anya :)

Swapna Raghu Sanand said...

This is a very romantic post indeed.

Ekam said...

:)

Tanmaya said...

nice!!

deeps said...

the last lines sums it up all ...liked the way you hang it up ...

Suree said...

prams that was awesome...

Amity Me said...

there again, and it's about love. everyone and anyone can write a very good topic about love...:)

i thought this was submitted for sunday scribblings, sort of like an interview, this week's prompt there!

hugs dear for a somewhat melodramatic post!

:)

Poornima said...

Lovely lovely love

Raksha Raman said...

For Love is about embracing the imperfections and looking beyond them! Nice read Prams!

chocolate lover said...

swet :)) loved it..
nice love story.. :)

Riya Rocks said...

too good, sweet...Some times it is must to speak out ur emotions :)

Creativity!! said...

Woww :) :) So Beautiful Post Dear :) :)

divsi said...

oh boi....lovely read...:)

Jack said...

Pramoda,

Read 9 pending posts yesterday and this one today. Could not post comments yesterday as your previous post seems to be comment disabled. Now here I go -

1. On that Sunday : Google had nice time with you. Obama, I think it was little too early. You forgot fielding in cricket. Good for attitude change but for better only.

2. Nice composition, Memories.

3. Celebrity - I would choose male version of Mother Terresa or Baba Amte.

4. See the movie and forget what you thought you learnt?

5. True, we should let children choose their own goals and encourage them to strive for it.

6. Again true statement on Irony.

7. Sachin must read this.

8. One must dream big but aim what can be achieved within or little more than his or her capabilities.

9. Match result was forgone conclussion the moment one saw our score. No miracle were expected from our lads.

10. This one, fiction based on facts, isn't it? LOL

Take care

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Pramoda,

Wow! that was a really different and lovely post from you,uve presented it to give the reader a visual effect...thanks
"Heartbeats locked" - thats a new phrase for me...wonderful too :)

anupama said...
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Anonymous said...

Tht shows tht she was you :) :)

Snow White said...

Nice one pramoda..loved it :)

deeps said...

oops .. that post was actually for someone else ...
i have nothing to do in it whatsoever ... :-P

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

ooh wow... this is such a nice and different story...ossum!!!

Priya Joyce said...

simply wonderful dear..
I liked the way u expressed the way both of them specially the gal knew tat he too loved her..

yeah..love is simply an amazing feeling..it does not always happen to people we admire..it infact happens to those we initially dun even like to see..

:):)

anupama said...

Dear Prams,
Good Evening!
At last,a romantic post from you.:)I too published one on love.
but personally,i would love the boy to express the feelings and propose!:)
i enjoyed the photo,of the lovers lost and locked in deep love.:)
wishing a cool n lovely night,
sasneham,
Anu

Dhiman said...

If this one is complete fiction then Wow .... its really nice but if based on true events then the Boy and Girl are very lucky I must say ....

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Followed a trial of links and landed here, and am I happy I did! Beautiful dialogue. Simple, subtle and romantic. Cheers.

cool drizzle said...

Hi!
Could relate very well to your words,beautifully written,thanks i think u can try your hand in writing plays

Leo said...

hmm :) he wanted to express his love... but she expressed hers for him b4 he could.
they wanted to be with each other and they got what they wanted. :)
they did indeed deserve each other i think. lovely post Prams!

Being Pramoda... said...

hi yvonne..thank you...

Being Pramoda... said...

hi madhu..

thank yuu soo much ...

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Prasad,

its a real pleasure to have comment on my write ups..Thank you ...:)

Being Pramoda... said...

and next time, plz inform me t which posts u have commenetd .. eheheh ..ok naa...LoL

Being Pramoda... said...

hi prasad,

thank you.thank you..

:) All the best to u toooo...:)

Being Pramoda... said...

hi anya ..thanks alott..

Being Pramoda... said...

swapna,

thanks yaar..

Being Pramoda... said...

hi ekam .thank youu

Being Pramoda... said...

hi tanmaya,

thank youuu

Being Pramoda... said...

hi deeps,

:) So nice of you..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

hi suresh,

thank youuu..

Being Pramoda... said...

hi amity,

yeah..everyone's feelings abt love are special..:)

Thanks yaar

Being Pramoda... said...

hi poornima,

thank youu soo much and welcome here..

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Raksha

Thank youuu

Being Pramoda... said...

hi chaco lover...thank you gal...

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Riya

true...:) Thanks

Being Pramoda... said...

hi sahana,

thanks mam...

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Divsi,

thank youuu

Being Pramoda... said...

hi uncle,

so nice of you to have read and comented abt all those ones..:) I enjoy ur replies...

Male version of mother theressa is much awaited..:) And yaa our players have only one chance tomorrow to play their hearts..

Being Pramoda... said...

and jack uncle,

haa sachin must read this....but saching reading my blog .. hehe .. i dream of it..

Being Pramoda... said...

hi RD .. thank youu soo much .. am very happy at ur commnt..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Comment deleted ..

hey Anu..Kya hua??

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Anonymous..

hhehehe..not me ... :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Suma, Thank you dear ...

Being Pramoda... said...

hey deeps..whats going on re?

Being Pramoda... said...

hi sid,

thank you..enjoy the days at home..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi ANu,

Thanks for coming again..

:) The bou culd have done it..but yaa she took the chace..:) either way is ok,right?

:) Thanks Anu..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Priya,

True punch !!

Thank you gal ..

Being Pramoda... said...

hi dhamanji..

yaa they are lucky ..:) Thank youu

Being Pramoda... said...

Hai Prabhu,

Welcome here..Thank you soo much and am too happy that u r stopped by my space.:)

Plz kep coming ..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Cool Drizzle

hey wow..welcome here ..

that was a grt sugession for me . :) But i need more practice..this is my frst of its kind post..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Vinay,

they they deserved each other...thank youuuuu

Tranquility Speaks said...

Touch Wood! How good :D wish everyone was like this :)

Being Pramoda... said...

hi TS

well yaar..thank u..")

Dhanya said...

So sweet! Seriously :D

Being Pramoda... said...

hi Dhanya..

Thank yuu...

Abdul said...

impossible.. happens only in stories.. even after years we discover that we dunno so much abt the people we love..

good read though.. :) stories like these spoils us.. expectin real life to be as ostensibly romantic!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Abdul..welcome here..:)

Tortoise and rabbit never kept any race..but we learn from that story so much .. in fact that would be the first story probably, that every child learns..

stories let us know the possibilities. it is up to us how we face them in real life..

Thank you soo much for letting me think on this..:) plz Do visit my blog often..

Abdul said...

well said.. though i still don agree wit u.. :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Abdul,

its so nice to see u coming back to this page and reading me..Thank You..

Well, its ok if we cant agree to each other..Both are correct ... hehe..enjoy ur weekend..

Anonymous said...

do u want to post just some englìśh?

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Anonymous

Well, Not really.. :)