Jun 15, 2010

World, with bricks of love…

If everything is possible,
Every mistake is also possible.
If everything is possible,
Every excuse is also possible.
Every excuse is also possible.

If every mistake is excused,
There we are, confirmed, proud,
To think aloud, believe, that
We are in the world, which is
Built with the bricks of love.

Being human, being able to think,
Being able to feel and love,
It is solely every one’s responsibility
To make and keep the world of love
Really big and always welcoming.

In such world, everything feels high;
In such world everyone feels freedom;
In such world every deed is valued;
In such world, obviously,
Sins or mistakes will be reduced.

33 comments:

Amity said...

Good morning Prams;

Hi dear, I missed you, was absent in your blog for a long time...but I am thankful you were always in my blog, and that gives me joys and smiles...:)

Your poem here is very nice, it is indeed sending a very good message to everyone...:))

May find a world that is truly loving, a world where there is freedom, a world where you and I can live happily...don't you like that? I do!!!

Hugs dear! :)

Love,

Amity

A New Beginning said...

Nice one :)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Excellent one.

Have a good day,

Yvonne.

Ms.Meduri said...

wow...lovely...much needed post..thanks di...!!!

Luv u

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

beautiful!
loved it prams di ^_____^

Ria said...

beautifully worded!! Loved it.

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Pramoda,

a good one for a better loving world :)

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Pramoda,

a good one for a better loving world :)

The Idle Brain said...

Change ur blog template.. Do it .. now!

deeps said...

like someone said, it s love that moves the world...

yea, you guessed it right.. it s KP uncle.. :-P

Snow White said...

hi pramoda,
sorry dear was a bit busy these days so couldn visit ur blog..the poem is very beautiful dear..loved the last five lines a lot :)

Diana said...

I love the words "Built with bricks of love"! This was beautiful Prams. Thank you, Love Di ♥

Creativity!! said...

Lovely Beautiful Poem :) :)

Jack said...

Pramoda,

So true. If we care for each other, it would be so heavenly.

Take care

Shas said...

Nice thought.
Hi! do check out my blog. Therez something waiting for you :)

Nature Lover said...

Beautiful Poem.

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Amity, thank you so much dear.. its always a pleasure reading you..:) Lovely human being u are.:)

Being Pramoda... said...

new begining, thank you..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Yvonne, thanks a ton!!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Yamini, thanks sis..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Chaco lover, thank you.:)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Ria, thank you so much RIa..: Its pleasure..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

hello RD, thats soo encouraging !!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Valli, haha why? i feel like a plastic surgehy has happedned to my blg if i change the template. i have been seeing this since 2.5 years almost.:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hello deeps, well said..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Suma, thank you so much..so nice of you..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi DIana, my pleasure..and im glad too:)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Sahana, thanks..:)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Jack uncle, well said..P)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Shas, will do..thanks a lot..;)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Nature lover, thank you so much..:)

Saumya said...

loved it...beautifuly penned..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Saumya, thank you.