Sep 24, 2011

I Enjoy It Still…

As the places
We roamed
Make me realize
Your absence,
I enjoy it still.

As the skies
We stared
Cover me alone,
Without you,
I enjoy it still.

I enjoy it, the thought,
You are being thought.

I enjoy it, the feeling,
You are being felt.

I enjoy it, the breathe,
You are being breathed.
I enjoy it still, cause,
I’m being watched,
From the heavens you live,
I’m being felt,
By my heart you own.

Whatever I do
Without you,
Though all alone,
I will enjoy it,
For us, for you.

PS: Just fiction work…

30 comments:

Pria Rao said...

nice one still! :)

Anya said...

Its wonderful (fictionwork :-)
Love it ....


Have a fantastic sunday
hugs
Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<

Zeba said...

fiction or not, I love it. :)

Shukoor said...

Nice work.
Beautiful lines...
Thanks

KParthasarathi said...

Beautiful and touching.Well done
Pramoda

Pranab said...

enjoyed it! loved it! :)

Rachit said...

love was the only thing in between us.. wonderful poem :)

Weakest LINK

deeps said...

thats a beautiful work....

Jyoti Mishra said...

Even after missing many of ur posts..
I enjoy it still :P

Well jokes apart
a lovely read and beautifully written.
Imagery was superb.

adithyasaravana said...

nice verses.. melancholy also has to be rejoiced..absence still kindles passions..Isn't that a nice feeling?

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

He's being remembered, and is missed, with a smile on the face.

Lovely!


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Diana said...

Very nice prams!
Love Di ♥

kaykuala said...

Pramoda,
Fiction, but still it's worth a million times in dreams for that someone!

Hank

Being Pramoda... said...

Thanks Pria

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Anya.. wow.. nice to see u back after so long..

thanks ya..

Being Pramoda... said...

Thanks Zeba.. welcome here..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Shukoor.. thank you..

Being Pramoda... said...

Thanks Partha uncle..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi pranab, thanks :)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Rachit.. thanks..

Being Pramoda... said...

Thank you deeps..;)

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Jyothi.. thank you so much ya :)

Keep coming here..;)

Being Pramoda... said...

Really nice one aditya..

Being Pramoda... said...

@ hi BA..

Yeah, :) thanks fr recognizing it.;)

Being Pramoda... said...

Thanks Di..

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Kaykula..

wow.. nice ..;) Thanks so much..!!

Susie Clevenger said...

This evokes memories of my parents who are gone now...I can enjoy things I used to do with them and the memories make me feel they are with me.

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Susie..

that's nice.. memories of parents always bring joy to heart..

Have a good day..

Menachery said...

awwwwwwww..... i liked it a lot.. i recently lost a very dear friend of mine, this one just brought back memories....

Being Pramoda... said...

@ Menachery..

hi, welcome here..

That's sad about ur frnd.. memories remain forever..